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Post by umbie on Jul 26, 2009 12:25:49 GMT -5
umbie slowly , quietly crept out of the bushes, careful not to get caught by anyone, and scaned the clearing for signs of life, he saw some light on the other side of the clearing. It didin't look human made, it looked like pokemon made it. finally umbie thought, pokemon. Friends??? he flew (or hoverd) slowly over to it.
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Post by Shining Lights on Oct 4, 2009 18:37:27 GMT -5
Shining lights looked up towards the rustle. "Who's there" she said caustionsly hoping it wasn't a human.
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Post by umbie on Oct 4, 2009 19:06:32 GMT -5
a pokemon? could it be? a wild one? a friend? umbie wondered all these things as he creped towards shining lights.
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Post by Shining Lights on Oct 4, 2009 19:18:59 GMT -5
(Not trying to be mean umbie but could you have slightly correct grammer like capital at tthe begining of the sentece sorry if I sound like a jerk))
Shining lights creep towards the bush pushing it aside she saw a mew. "Who are you" She asked.
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Post by umbie on Oct 4, 2009 19:21:11 GMT -5
who are you?(i was in a rush i'm always in a rush)
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Post by Shining Lights on Oct 5, 2009 15:24:22 GMT -5
((KK I guess))
"I'm Shining lights. And again who are you?" She said looking at the mew.
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Post by umbie on Oct 5, 2009 16:28:05 GMT -5
I'm umbie,'ve been on the run from humans for thousands of years, and i'm very lonely because i can't be friends with pokemon owned by humans.
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Post by Shining Lights on Oct 5, 2009 19:06:14 GMT -5
"You could stay with me" she said kindly
(I'm not saying you have to do this but instead of just typeing the diolouge and thoughts reglary try dicribing the surrondings or somin)
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Post by umbie on Oct 5, 2009 19:32:06 GMT -5
i was about to ask the same thing, by any chance, do you know what that fire is?  ?? |
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Post by Shining Lights on Oct 6, 2009 14:46:15 GMT -5
"Yeaah who doesn't?"
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